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victoria_silverwolf ([personal profile] victoria_silverwolf) wrote in [personal profile] galacticjourney 2015-03-03 03:02 am (UTC)

Two Short Stories

I didn't care for "To Be Continued" at all. The writing style seemed amateurish, almost childish, and the whole thing seemed kind of silly.

The conclusion of "Old Shag" wasn't much, but I did like the way the author wrote about working on a locomotive.

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