laurose8: (Shiveria)
laurose8 ([personal profile] laurose8) wrote in [personal profile] galacticjourney 2013-11-04 04:14 am (UTC)

Though I don't think I can access this story, I'm sure you're not a dunce. Strong on ideas, but I'd guess weak on exposition.

Frankly, it sounds caterpillar-pink rather than Smith-purple. In 1958, there was probably room for more colours. (Disappointing, how the pinks' washed into everything, by 2013-now.)

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